" Precious Words"

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    • blackfootlady
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    Life is meant to be Happy,filled with love,Good People, and Precious.Theres so much Domestic Violence.Having walked away from it and finding A Life totally the opposite .I consider Myself a survivor. Do not accept the unacceptable...

    " Precious Words"

     I have yet to see anything make sense..
    Yet You still express anger and commence.
    So today I would like to share how I am feeling.
    On My Knees Now where I'm still Kneeling.
    I have no time for anger nor rage.
    I am telling You now why I wrote this page.
    I cherish Life just for today for reasons.
    To devote My Time to enjoy the beauties of Our Seasons.
    Time to Me is so precious; So,I love!
    For I have been given a chance to glance above.
    Gods' Wind whispering softly in My ears'.
    The thought of being held instead when I am in tears.
    My tears are A Grateful Gift for this precious time.
    They are merciful by the opportunities of my prime.
    For to be blessed with the Gift of Life still in My hand.
    I promise You One thing I will have strength to stand.
    The truest part of Me has just talked to You.
    As We part in friendship;will You shine too?
    Will You cherish precious time in Our Path we cross?
    Can You hear precious words before They get lost?

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on " Precious Words"

    11-26-2010

    these words are truly a gift to us all from your heart. your spirit is shinning so brightly all through the lines in your message, so bright that it reflects on all of us who have paused to read these precious words....simple humble and precious.........love asha
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    blackfootlady

    11/27/2010

    Bottom line: If I did not Have The love of friendships I would never of found these Precious Words I speak of.TY My friend Apaq and the Rest of You.-Love-Black

    redbloodink commented on " Precious Words"

    09-20-2010

    You know Churv these words rang so true in my ears to my sight and then right to the core of my being...... God love you my friend and warm hugs from me with His love......... red
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    blackfootlady

    09/20/2010

    Ty My Friend,Hugs Be well and stay in touch.

    redbloodink

    09/21/2010

    I will ..... I'm trying to read a write or two from every one that has left me a comment..... lots of reading to do.... and some times so little time for it.... Have a blessed week...... red

    gogant commented on " Precious Words"

    08-25-2010

    Nice words, Churv..........it's always springtime when we look up at the birds and clouds, and smile........nothing can destroy the love we feel.....nor stand in our way of living life to the fullest. Your poem is precious, and sincere.........I enjoyed reading it at this midnight hour....comforting................................gogant
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    blackfootlady

    08/25/2010

    Thank You Gogant,That was a very pleasent response and I appreciate You reading this poem,thank you again-Black

    Teardrops commented on " Precious Words"

    08-24-2010

    You have such wisdom aand grace ilove this poem Makes me think of the Smokies great write my friend thank you Marie
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    blackfootlady

    08/24/2010

    Marie how are You?good to see Your still rating My poetry and I ty very much for Your comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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