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     You cut me,
    but you beg me not to bleed.
    You make me love you,
    but dare me to need you.
    You smother me,
    then ask me why I can't breathe.
    You set me on fire,
    then you are shocked when I get burnt.
    When am I going to learn?
    Loving you is like loving a mirror
    and there is only one side to your truth.
    I can't keep changing my view
    to see what you do.
    I GIVE UP!

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    wildpendigus commented on 1 side

    08-06-2009

    I think this is one of your best poems, I think also from a musical standpoint it would ne a good Pop Song Ballad, and I hear many possibilities that could make this song, or poem a hit recording from my expertise and what I know through the years, your very talented ! keep writing WP grecowong@yahoo.com
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    poetictrisha28

    08/06/2009

    Thank you very much I never thought about writing songs wouldn't really know where to begin but thanks for the kind words!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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