2 of you
He takes me where
I am comfortable
I laugh.
Familiar
Your journeys
go deep
I am afraid
unknown
change2 of you
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07-04-2009
- This poem inspires questions on my part. If this person takes where you are comfortable, you laugh, and it's familiar, why are you afraid? What is unknown, and what is the change? I think you could write more, that this could tell more so that the reader isn't left wondering what changed the first half into something to be feared. It's may be just my opinion, so ignore it if you don't agree.
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