2010

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    THE YEAR 2010,AND ALL ITS UPS AND DOWNS AND YES WE STAND TO TELL THE TALES,

    2010

    COMING TO A CLOSE
    FULL OF MEMORY OF LONG
    CRYING TALE, STARTED WITH A BANG
    AS ALWAYS AND SLOW TO A CRAWL ,AFTER MARCH
    APRIL WAS THAT MONTH THAT MY MOM TURN
    93 AND YES WE CELEBRATE WITH GOD MERCIES..

    THE BIG BANG,50 YES WAS MY TURN TO MATURE
    INTO THAT PERSON,GRAND CHILD WOULD COME NEXT
    AND THE WORLD NEVER THE SAME,,X TURN 13 WITH A
    MARK OF NEVER RETURN,WHEN HE VIOLATE ALL RULES
    AND SPEND NIGHTS IN THE PEN NOW ON THE ROLL
    THAT NEVER CALL,,NEEK AS USUALLY PLAY THE GAME
    LEFT AND RIGHT MISTAKES AFTER MISTAKE TO
    BECOME THAT GIRL AT 13..

    WEEZY SEE  LIFE AS NEVER BEFORE,FOCUS AND
    DEEP IN THOUGHTS,BOOKS AND EDUCATION TAKE
    ALL HER TIME TO BECOME 21 AND HEADING FOR
    THE SKY,,TANYA MOVE AWAY AND TRADE HER MARK ON
    LIFE COURSE PRODUCE A CHILD NOLA,FIRST GRAND CHILD
    PALMER  SX9 WELCOME..

    YES IT WAS 2010 AND ALL  THINGS WAS NEVER THE SAME
    FOR LIFE BRINGS IT MISFORTUNE IN ALL AVENUE AND LANES
    COUNTRIES AND STATES,AND MY LIFE WAS NEVER  THE SAME
    OF BETRAYAL AND DECEIT,SORROWFUL DISPLAY OF WOMANS
    DISHONEST AND FADED GLORY OF SELF,YES IT WAS 2010
    AND GOD WAS NEVER SEEN IN THE SAME LIGHT,MY HEART SPEAKS
    AND MY SOULS LISTEN AND UNDERSTAND THAT WHAT WE SEE  
    IS LIFE AND DEATH AND LIFE SHARE THE SAME MOTHER,AND YOU AND I
    ARE ONLY DISTANT COUSIN TRYING TO KNOW WHATS BEST.

    IT WAS 2010 I READ THE BIBLE TO ITS FINAL PAGES REVELATION,
    AND SAW THE FLAMES OF GLORY FADE BEFORE MY EYES AND YES
    GOD IS REAL AND HE IS IN ME. MY WIFE WOULD BECOME THE TEMPLE THAT
    NEVER WAS,AND SLOWLY FADE IN GROWN TWIGS IN DARK PLACES,

    TODAY WE STAND FOR IT IS DECEMBER,AND AS WE
    COUNT DOWN  FROM THE BRUISED  OF 2010 WE INDEED HOPE TOMORROW BRING TRUE LOVE AND A DIFFERENT FRAME OF MIND. SO ALL
    SOULS WILL BE ABLE TO STRIVE AND MAKE THIS PIECE OF SOIL
    PEACEFUL AND ORGANIC, WALK GOOD..
     

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    REGINA2 commented on 2010

    12-23-2010

    Hello, my friend. I'm feeling your "vibes." A very nice poem and very true. God bless your mother. I hope she lives to be 100. Merry Christmas to all of you.

    Sx9

    12/24/2010

    thanks ,and same here,,

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on 2010

    12-22-2010

    I love the storytelling and honesty in this one. As one year ends it is a blessing to see a new year begin. These things that happened are in the past and your future is yet to come. So continue to move forward and remember to have fun ;-)..............E

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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