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    The smell of sense enchants a Lover
    Behind the screens of silk and cover
    A shadow of a figure touches me.
    Tightens the lace to heighten pace
    My breath in short as his fingers trace
    The small of my back...
    He inches way to control the dark
    of my heart, he cinches lace to create
    his art, as he pins into place his name.
    Marked on my soul I succumb to flame
    What burns in the fire is a body of shame
    Pleasure delivers in the form of pain as
    Ruby lips wear the glistening stain, of sin.
    I strain not to smile as I allow him in...
    Lover, my knees indeed weaken
    Erotic treasure behind the scenes
    Given to the pleasure of your hands
    Forbidden mystery I've yet to know
    Tightens the lace and binds the ropes...
    I lower my eyes... and submit to 'control'.
    Folding over is a hole in Time
    Shattering light penetrates my mind
    Eyes of Storm turn a spiraling wind
    as forces grow at the base of my spine
    "...Master, I saw and built the line..."
    A naughty touch of my Lovers hand
    A space beyond the desert sands
    A golden glow in the eyes of a Man...
    Lace on my nipples dance, ripples,
    tingles, singing on my lips, subtle and
    supple, the nibbling riddles, reach me
    there and here in the middle...hear...
    Behind the screens of silk and cover
    A shadow of a Lover, teaches me.
    Raising my eyes, I submit to Be.
    The smell of sense enchants a Lover
    Behind the screens of silk and cover
    A shadow of a figure touches me.
    Tightens the lace to heighten pace
    My breath in short as his fingers trace
    The small of my back...
    He inches way to control the dark
    of my heart, he cinches lace to create
    his art, as he pins into place his name.
    Marked on my soul I succumb to flame
    What burns in the fire is a body of shame
    Pleasure delivers in the guise of pain as
    Ruby lips wear the glistening stain, of sin.
    I strain not to smile as I allow him in...
    Lover, my knees indeed weaken
    Erotic treasure behind the scenes
    Given to the pleasure of your hands
    Forbidden mystery I've yet to know
    Tightens the lace and binds the ropes...
    I lower my eyes... and submit to 'control'.
    Folding over is a hole in Time
    Shattering light penetrates my mind
    Eyes of Storm turn a spiraling wind
    as forces grow at the base of my spine
    "...Master, I saw and built the line..."
    A naughty touch of my Lovers hand
    A space beyond the desert sands
    A golden glow in the eyes of a Man...
    Lace on my nipples dance, ripples,
    tingles, singing on my lips, subtle and
    supple, the nibbling riddles, reach me
    there and here in the middle...hear...
    Behind the screens of silk and cover
    A shadow of a Lover, teaches me.
    Raising my eyes, I submit to Be.

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    hoth2o commented on 2Submit

    01-21-2010

    It seems that while you reflect the senual side it might be with one not there. Does that make sense? I hope so....

    IzzyGumbo

    01/21/2010

    That does make senses hoth2o :) xo thank you.

    soulwriter commented on 2Submit

    12-05-2009

    Added to favorites and soon to be a favorite to many - seductive and tantalizing in a way that increases the readers blood pressure causing uncontrollable little gasps - no so naughty as to make one blush, but sensual in ways to bring the imagination to the place of lingering in the senses of their most perfect lover. 10

    IzzyGumbo

    12/06/2009

    Thank you SoulWriter! This means a lot to me what you comment and I greatly appreciate you! Hugs!

    ginga commented on 2Submit

    12-05-2009

    Izzy, I like this poem because it tells of lust in a matter-of-fact way. It seems as if all that happens here is expected however the word "submit" give the message that maybe something is amiss and the submitter would rather not be in this position. The mystery surrounding the affair is quite sensual. ginga

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