3 Stages Of Love...

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3 Stages Of Love...

Well me and my 2 good friends were thinking of something creative and we came up with this Three Stage poem, which each of us will write about each stage in our own technique lol Brandon writes about when he first meets the girl,and how he feels ,
Joseph writes about how much he loves her and i write about the break up and missing her =] aka" The Three Stages Of Love "
Three Stages Of Love


(Brandon)(Stage1- Love At First Sight)
I just saw you walk by,
Damn you just caught my eye,
Made me have to look twice,
Cause i aint seen a girl look so nice,
i never believed in love in love at first sight,
Not until i saw you walk by,
Now i cant stop looking at your lushes thighs,
i'm also looking at your beautiful green eyes,
Seeing you feels like being high,
And i can tell you now never will this love die,
You make me feel complete,
Now i feel like an elite,
Warrior from another place,
All this is possible only when im in your grace,
Cant wait to make you mine,
love has never been so divine.
(Joseph) (Stage 2 -Love For Her)
Love is a four letter word,
Its unseen its unheard,
I'm so glad your in my life,
I hope we last forever become my wife,
You have me so shy sometimes,
And i cant help but say a rhyme,
Your my life my everything,
You make my heart fully come out and sing,
Most people have love in there veins,
When you say the word it stains,
Got a place in my heart forever,
Through any storm any weather,
I love you so much,
I'm glad i met you and asked you to lunch,
I'm glad that your in my mind,
In my soul your so kind,
My life has been so caught up and twisted,
Every time we kiss I'm feeling so lifted,
Your kisses are like smoking herb,
What can i say love is the best word,
How else can you be compared,
My heart is fixed no longer teared,
Its a new begging,
I see you smiling i see you grinning,
(Me)(Stage 3 - I Want You To Know I Miss You_Breaking Up)

I look out the window,
See the night sky,
Reminds me of you though,
It really does, no lie,
Its so beautiful,"I wish upon a star",
Maybe tonight,
I can be with you ,"Where ever you are",
I miss you so much,
I love you with all my heart,
I miss your touch ,
I can feel you when we are apart,
Even though we aren't together,
I wish we still are,
It seems like forever,
Since we last talked,
Staring constantly,
At life's clocks,
Counting down the seconds,
Until i see you again,
Life is pointless,
Without you holding my hand,
Feeling your heart beat ,
Is all worth the living,
And if I knew,
That my heart would break,
My love for you,
Would of never changed,
Your heart,
I would never trade,
When i met you,
My life style rearranged,
But I guess its time to move on,
That's how life goes,
You love someone,
And watch them go,
But you made my whole world,
I just wanted you to know....

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ImStillHere commented on 3 Stages Of Love...

09-26-2010

i like how its all three of you sharing your ideals about each stage :) its really unique. :D LOVE IT!!!!

Chaos128 commented on 3 Stages Of Love...

08-10-2010

Boy meets girl. Boy loves girl. Boy loses girl... then it all starts up all over again... just like ongoing performances of a play... just sometimes the cast changes, that's all. Well done!

AsWinterFalls

08/10/2010

Haha yeh i think thats how life goes tho lol i appreciate you commenting and reading my poems. Thankyou =] Me and my friends always wanted to do something like this haha its jus amazing that we actually finished this poem haha

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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