720 Full Moons


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  • Dahlusion

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    This one is for me, and if the reader can relate to it or finds it entertaining then that's a bonus. Peace and Light, Dah

    720 Full Moons



    This poem is in my first book, "In Forbidden Language"
    published by Stillpoint Press, Spokane, Washington.

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    Thank you,

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    carynontherhine commented on 720 Full Moons


    I believe this write to be the most insightful and now important poem of my life. Every word is true to me. Yes, this is creation, not a synthetic God or religion. I was raised Catholic then turned Christian and now on my own. None of these man created religions make sense to me. They hang over the bible doing exactly as it says. Me, I think the bible is a bunch of man written normal maybe for their time and crazy sounding in this era. When I question the foolishness I am scolded and outcasted. I was scorned from my family for becoming pregnant with my son at so young of an age. And even though I married, made no difference to a Catholic family so I never raised him to be of anything and told him to not worry it was ok to find his own.This is so overwhelming that I must go and think this through. Hugz



    The world's religions are scrambling to cover up for thousands of years of illusions, deceit, and lies, and seeking more control —their time is running out. Jesus was not Christian, nor Jew. He was a self-contained mystic, and most likely said very little of the stuff the Bible makers [all men] have written about him. Imagine a loving God who says "women are not allowed to speak in the house of God" That nut case, Apostle Paul, wrote that one amongst other horrible rules against women. Religion has nothing to do with spirituality, they are as different as gold and lead. Thank you for knowing who you are.

    Bobbie876 commented on 720 Full Moons


    I wonder if i will ever be able to use words like this... your use of words is fascinating , mind boggling captivating.... praise be to and for whatever experiences and persons that made you hone this craft..i'm humbled....truly i am..this is so deeply spiritual



    thank you...

    ApaqRasgirl commented on 720 Full Moons


    that was a splendid write of growing older, your words always pain the picture so well my friend......great read......loved it.....loves ya asha



    thank you...



    paint the picture......ooops not pain..........lol

    gregster commented on 720 Full Moons


    so a universe that awesome but not created by GOD.......HMMMM...well in fact this is poetry and it is expressed nicely....so all i say is continue to write beauifully



    we are the god that we seek, all of us, "created in his image"...thank you...

    mustascheman commented on 720 Full Moons


    Interesting...that is an unique way of expressing ones pleasure of aging. Awesome!



    thank you, and I hope that you find the same pleasure in seasoning your wisdom as you age...

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    dahlusion’s Poems (122)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    fragmented no. 2 1
    Espresso Roma Café 1
    Afternoon’s Impossible Heat 1
    Spherical 1
    Moths, Flame 1
    To Say Goodbye Means Forgetting 1
    "The Stillness Of Quiet Light" 2
    The Vanishing Of Differences 2
    Some god 3
    Cattails 1
    Invisible 3
    The Persistence Of Nightmares 1
    Gardener 4
    Poison And Beauty 15
    Moon Illusion 24
    How We Live On Earth 13
    Creation’s Splendid Spiritual Seduction 26
    The Wings On Your Tongue 32
    Walt Whitman, I Want To Grow Your Beard 102
    The Witch-Hunters 26
    A Meditation On Autumn 33
    The Most Savory Raw Liquid 28
    The Alluring Wet Odor 27
    Snakes Passing Out Apples 33
    I Dismissed The Notion Of Death 36
    The Night’s Breath Is More Liquid 28
    Strangers With Memories 35
    Glorify The Morning Silently 21
    I Slept Late Into A Well-Worn Rest 21
    the afterglow twisted its complexion 21
    The Rapturous Ignorance Of My Human Moment 29
    I Wait For God's Lips 31
    Your Human Honey 16
    I Have Gathered Your Energy 20
    Poem For A Red Rose 24
    discarded pages 25
    when you stir in your sleep 26
    scars void of desire 22
    I Feel Summer’s Juice 24
    Imagine Not Going To War 101
    Like A Snowflake in August 36
    Upon The Tender Leaves Of Spring 34
    A Blue Tear Frozen On Your Delicate Wing 47
    Hiding Behind Mythology 27
    Coaxing My Soul Into The Open 24
    Wet Thoughts For Thirsty Minds 46
    720 Full Moons 65
    Sexual Opium 41
    I Praise The Morning Loudly 99
    Your Sultry Whispering 29
    I Feel Nothing 32
    The Refusal Of Dead Roses: an unfinished love 24
    ripples and waves 20
    Now The Rain 18
    Male Angels 21
    Female Angels 18
    The Atmosphere’
    s Vibration
    Show Me Something Invisible 29
    Motionlessly, Mouths Touching. 19
    The Scent Of My Lover 22
    3:AM INSOMNIA 19
    Sorrow’s Dangerous Death-Blade 33
    Melodious Flames Intertwined 39
    Entranced By Your Voice 28
    my mouth is on yours 24
    Father, I Have Sinned... 66
    The Wild Mud Of Sleep 20
    i am 26
    Let Us Make Peace 21
    That Twilight Flame 18
    A Wellness Of Spirit 15
    Kisses Like Deep Fruit 41
    Pulsing. 13
    common sense is My Savior 39
    Earthy and Hot 22
    Once I Was Somewhere 22
    The Only God I Need 22
    2 Ten AM 27
    If I Ask The Dead For Memories 92
    Your Intimate Voice 27
    I Am Bound To You 36
    Animals With The Same Motion 15
    There Was Constant Throbbing 22
    A Prisoner Of Hope 15
    My Perfect Goddess 15
    Twilight Is A Sudden Sadness 71
    when the hour strikes 16
    Autumn's Meloncholic Motion 28
    Autumn's Organic Rust 22
    My Perfect Swan 33
    The Politeness Of Blue Sky 12
    Upon My Lips 20
    A Sensualist Articulation (Prose) 14
    The Fragrance of Fantasy 43
    During Our Most Secret Hours 22
    Under A Sky Of Dreamy Dreams 29
    The Sultry Warmth 21
    When I Looked Again 29
    The Sea 44
    the Creator is us 29
    Blades Of Lightning 30
    A Dove Is Bleeding 26
    I Hear Vaporous Rain 16
    My Perfect Dove 35
    If You Were Chocolate 59
    You Do Not Deserve 37
    A Shawl Of Indigo Aura 26
    Then The Tumblers Rust 88
    There Is Arrogance 41
    The Singing From My Soul 23
    You 18
    Do Not Remain… 12
    A Pyramid Of Stars 8
    Holding A Storm 12
    You Have Finally Faded 20
    A Gothic Tale 19
    A Gasping Goddess 18
    Hour After Hour 13
    Your Naked Smell 24
    Unknown To Me Then 10
    I Bring Myself Back From A Dream 16
    When You Disappear 26