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The poem came from a question, I put on facebook ,What will you do if the sun want shine and moon want come out,or want shine its light.

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Gazen out the giant glass window
rain drops, drizzling,fast slipping
racing down to the base of the window seal
the sky looks doomie
with
darkness
mind drifted, with a Question?
What will I do if the Sun didn't come out?
or
The Moon didn't show it's light.
I guess everybody answer is different,
Mine,
Is thank God I'm living
RIGHT!



Wakeitha Kilpatrick
copyright(C) March 2012



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Kingwebstar commented on (?)

06-03-2012

Wonderful poem your poem always brightens up my day today I have been sad cause my cat look like she was dead.She was not eating or anything so I took her to the vet and they are keeping her over night.I am scared she could die but I have faith God will make her well again.If she does die it was meant to be from God.

windsongs commented on (?)

03-16-2012

yeah , thank God I am living and say yeah I am sick of this place too! lol

Wakeitha

04/01/2012

God is good to us but we got to learn he is the beautiful flower that need nourishment, feed and water to grow into something beautiful. because we don't do the flower will get weak and die. He's our strenght we just have to realize it before its to late.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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