Unable

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Unable

I am sitting here
trying to think
finding myself
without a brink
oh exhulation or exicution
where i can lose my evolution
fi nding myself hurtling back
lost at once amid this stack
so high, so tall, so very unstable
peering upward into blinding light'
i may be unable

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MalikPeterson commented on Unable

03-22-2010

interesting...how exactly does this poem builder work? :)

Lizziewriter27

03/29/2010

its game thing lol it times you, and it kind of makes you put the first thing that comes to your mind. You should try it :)

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Lizziewriter27’s Poems (59)

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