A 2nd Chance

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    A 2nd Chance

     As a young man
    I often made
    decisions in haste

    Broke the law on occasion
    most of my time I wasted

    Drank things that were wrong
    and smoked things even worse

    and every other word
    out my my mouth was a curse

    But I have aged quite a bit
    and looked back on my days

    and I know for sure now
    that I have changed in my ways

    I have given up liquor
    and now do not smoke

    and the fires from my past
    are all but a smoke

    so I ask of you now
    do not judge me from then

    I am a better man because
    of the places I've been

    This world is song
    and I would like the last dance

    can a man who was once bad
    please get a 2nd chance.

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    ahardwalk commented on A 2nd Chance

    07-23-2009

    This would have to be my favorite of yours!! and the fires from my past are all but a smoke.............I am a better man because of the places I've been............can a man who was once bad please get a 2nd chance. just wanted to say those three lines hit me keep written
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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