A Beautiful Lie

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    A Beautiful Lie
    The supreme architect
    I created my own little world
    For the you and I
    In my head
    And in my heart
    To live together
    To love each other
    Inside my utopia
    We were in love with each other
    And we were happy
    My home was more in that make-believe house
    Than in my own
    Cold and empty, though full of people
    No you
    Meant no warmth, no light...
    So I retreated into myself
    Into my imaginary world
    Into our imaginary life
    And loved you in a lie
    But oh, what a beautiful lie
    To live.

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    ALMETRIC commented on A Beautiful Lie

    06-28-2009

    i will truly say your expression is so clear i love this!
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    jmylez commented on A Beautiful Lie

    05-16-2009

    i love the way you write,,,this is one of my favorite,,
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    butbychanz commented on A Beautiful Lie

    05-11-2009

    I think..I'll keep you..(read more of your stuff)... your interpretation is .. clear...consise...honest...mmmmmmm (smile)...!
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    organicchick commented on A Beautiful Lie

    04-08-2009

    Sometimes fantasy is much easier to live than truth. Don't stop writing!!!!
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    graceladymn commented on A Beautiful Lie

    02-02-2009

    How openly its said here. Nice writing.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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