A Beautiful Soul
When I looked into his eyes
I see this most beautiful light
It shines
It shines from his soul
It’s showing his greatness
I see all the good in him
All that he is and will be
I see, I see and I’m proud
A Beautiful Soul
5 Comments
Tags: Love
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tygseflrpdme commented on A Beautiful Soul
07-30-2009
- Are you familiar with the rondeau, a French fixed form that works very well for love poetry? Three stanzas: 5 lines, 4 lines. then 7 lines. The construct is RABBA; AABR; AABBBAR. A and B are rhymes and R is a refrain, a repeated rhyme or the entire line. Try it.
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07/30/2009
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1Love commented on A Beautiful Soul
07-30-2009
- I really enjoyes this one also. I loved the last line.
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1990lh commented on A Beautiful Soul
07-29-2009
- very nice and short i enjoyed it, thought it was full of love
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cliftondurant commented on A Beautiful Soul
07-25-2009
- Follow your heart cupid has shot a arrow in you heart hope you have find a love that last forever
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07/26/2009
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Lolee commented on A Beautiful Soul
07-25-2009
- This sounds like someone is truly in love...How refreshing in this time of transient affairs. Good stuff.
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