A BETTER DAY

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A BETTER DAY

A BETTER DAY FOR ME IS A BETTER DAY FOR OTHERS..A day of peace is day peacefully for everyone......A day of love for me is day of love for others....a day of help is like friendship for me and others....a day of bright sunshine it's day of victory over our sickness....

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narda58 commented on A BETTER DAY

09-22-2009

You made bettre for everybody that read this one Baby!!!!!!

emptyone commented on A BETTER DAY

02-19-2009

Your best work. Good one!

Realistic commented on A BETTER DAY

01-25-2009

nice one

smashly commented on A BETTER DAY

01-25-2009

Thats a good poem! I could understand that.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

aries14’s Poems (23)

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SOMETIMES I FEEL 0
DAY'S LIKE THIS 0
thinking of you,i am 0
AM waiting for you. 0
Pleasing you /// 0
Last night 0
The Gratefullness of life 0
The storm 3
Having you closed to me. 1
AM looking 0
FAMILY 1
KEEP ON 0
want you back with me. 1
I'm Glad 2
IF THE MOUNTAINS....
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0
Choices 2
Recognize what you have. -1
After being with you 0
A BETTER DAY 5
When i'm with you. 1
Don't worry 1
love 0
Hope 1