A Body So Torn

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A Body So Torn

A body so torn, a mind so mixed up.
The pain unbearable for one's soul.
I can not go on as others say.
It has to end some how some way.
The ups and downs to hard to handle.
A heart of pieces not of a whole.
Each piece belongs to a memory hard to let go.
Memories so bad it is hard to share.
If I express my feelings, they say to cope.
That I can not learn as much as I try.
Please let me go I don't want it anymore.
Let me not wake to another day.
I am ready so ready to go.

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hotnat123 commented on A Body So Torn

10-20-2010

Very real. i could see it came from an honest place.

Platti commented on A Body So Torn

05-13-2009

Very poignant, it's as if I am the person describing their feelings in the poem, thank you for posting

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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