A Break up poem

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    A Break up poem

     we are together
    it didn't take much time 
    and now that we are together
    i think i change my mind
    and no your not the one to blame
    it feels like someone's let out my inner flame
    My passion, desire the urge to be free
    being all tied down is just not me
    I like you a lot
    thats not hard to tell 
    It's just that I'm so used to being alone
    I dont know how to share myself
    and i refuse to hurt you
    thats the last thing i want to do
    but I'm hurting me 
    Trying to protect you
    I'm sorry 
    but being with you is just
    something I'm not ready to do...

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    Nataly commented on A Break up poem

    02-04-2010

    something like that
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    Jodes commented on A Break up poem

    02-03-2010

    That really hurts! I guess you have no time for relationshpi, uh?
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    XxshatteredxX commented on A Break up poem

    10-08-2009

    this is an interesting way to express a break up. i'm sorry it had to end that way. but sometimes these things happen. thats life for ya. im learning to share myself, its not easy. you just have to take it one day at a time.
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    Nataly

    10/08/2009

    very true

    Mrpoetry commented on A Break up poem

    10-02-2009

    great break-up but how did he feel when you told him. well at least you told him the truth instead of playing games. keep writing ok
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    Nataly

    10/05/2009

    thank u n he was really sad and i will

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