A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

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A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

REACH INTO YOUR CAGE OF BUTTERFLIES
LET ONE FLY AWAY
I LONG TO BE THE ONE YOU RELEASE TODAY
I AM THE ONLY ONE FOR YOU TO BELIEVE
I AM THE MOST LOYAL
N I JUST WANNA BE SUCCESFUL
BUT IN ORDER FOR ME TO DO ALL OF THIS
SO RELEASE ME
THIS IS MY FINAL PLEA
IN ORDER FOR ME TO BE HAPPY I MUST BE FREE
IF NOT I WILL BE A REGRET IN THE BACK OF YOUR MIND
WONDERING,IF U RELEAS ME THE LIFE I WOULD OF FOUND
BUT IF U LET ME GO
SURELY..... U WOULD KNOW

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BeeBeeButterfly commented on A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

08-28-2009

im feeling this right here. i call myself butterfly because im always looking for that freedom and this one right here spoke to me on that level.

mcelvain

11/11/2009

thank you i appreciate it.

LIFECHANGES commented on A BUTTERFLIES SECRET

08-22-2009

I can feel the butterflies yearning 4 freedom. At times we all have had the need 2-b free. I really like this piece.

mcelvain

11/11/2009

thank you . i appreciate this so much

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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