A Childs Wish (rev.)

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    It's time to stop the suffering. We can make a difference , you just have to want it bad enough !!

    A Childs Wish (rev.)

    A tear fell

    Upon my cheek

    As I tried

    To fall asleep

    I think of the children

    Who have no bed

    Or a place to rest

    Their little heads

    Then I think

    Did I do

    Everything I could’ve

    Or wanted to

    At this special

    Time of year

    Do all you can

    To ease their fears

    So before you go to bed

    Just ask yourself this

    Is there a way for me

    To grant a child’s wish

    Copyright 2009 ©William J. Fleitz

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    Rhymer commented on A Childs Wish (rev.)

    12-24-2009

    A sad but excellent write. Sometimes to grant a childs wish is only a matter of being there. A wonderful reminder to all of us that we can do more and not only during the christmas season. 10 from me.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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