A Country Road

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    A Country Road
    Driving down a country road
    Done on a constant routine
    Healing a young mind the end hope
    He fights what must be
    Steps to the living the wish of me
    Life so precious in times difficult
    Desiring that my get be all he can
    So we drive to his freedom
    He knows his steps are to the positive
    Yet he struggles to accept
    He will not understand the reality
    I say to him take your steps foward and let me watch
    For I will not always be here
    That I may watch and know you will be fine
    Take my strength and live
    Take my love and know
    You have strength
    You are mine
    Driving down this road of hope......
    Iamadreamr
    copywrite 05/18/09 K.D.G.

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    dahlusion commented on A Country Road

    05-22-2009

    This one is o.k., and, though, beautifully written, the story does not draw me in, does not make me feel it or taste it or hold it in my heart. Sometimes a poem can be so personal that the reader can not have it as their own. This is neither good or bad, it's just the way it is sometimes.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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