A Dark Christmas

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I just thought of this...it's kinda cuties pooh...and dark...

A Dark Christmas

The wind whips around me
As I sit under the snowy tree
The snow blows around
I've been walking so long
This was the only shelter I could find
It's Christmas eve
And I feel the grip of death upon me
The cold of the weather
The frozen water soaked me to the bone
I'm nearly frozen to death
I hear a beast come to me
It lays around my body
It is warm
I grip at it's fur shaking
It lays it's large head upon my lap
I lay agents the beast
Sleep grips at me
The beast wipers
It is worried
I drift off to a dreamless sleep
Awakening in the morning
To see a wolf wrapped around me
It is larger then any normal wolf
It is looking at me
It stands and runs into the trees
Coming out from where it went in
A young man approaches me
'I was worried about you'
I smile
A werewolf....
Saved me on Christmas eve...
And I knew, We were meant to be.

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BringMeBullets commented on A Dark Christmas

02-05-2010

This is very cool. I like the part when he comes out of the trees and reveals that he is human as well as wolf. It guides you along nicely into this fairy tale... I like it. Well done.

thedog commented on A Dark Christmas

12-22-2009

thats was very lovey i like it . i got some poems to read ples do xoxo andrew

redbloodink commented on A Dark Christmas

12-22-2009

great write Chi.... nice flow..... nice to see a dark write end with such a loving end..... red

MarionYost commented on A Dark Christmas

12-15-2009

I agree This one's AWESOME! Originality is the key to great poetry. Thanks for sharing! All the best -Marion-

SoundingStorm commented on A Dark Christmas

12-15-2009

I liked this a lot! very beautiful, and is very hopeful with the darkness coming to light at the end there, keep writing!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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