A Dark Princess's Thoughts

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I just threw this together

A Dark Princess's Thoughts

Energy from the blood of man
Is all this vampire's dark princess
Needs to survive
While I haven't fed in months
I can survive for years with one hunt
I'm still alive
Even the light of day can not turn me to ash
I wonder this earth
Lost
Alone
But I know there are others
Others like me
Wondering
Alone
Many may have a companion
Many may have love
I find few I've ment years ago
Any yet the can not remember my name
I know them from their sent
And the way their blood smells
I can't tell for certain if they are my enemies
For life has bound me to a werewolf
So I am not like the others
They can be hurt by the sun and I....
Can not
It's the werewolf in me....
Who protects my forgotten soul from the sun of the day
I can wonder this earth alone and lost
For centuries more and still not feel the death that will never come
To me at lest

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Mandi commented on A Dark Princess's Thoughts

03-11-2010

there is always omething deep and romantic about this type of character isn't there? YOur poem seduces a reader and holds them fast. Nice job...

countrychaos commented on A Dark Princess's Thoughts

02-10-2010

WOW! This rocks! Ive always loved vampires and the legends and lore. i like the way you worded it as if you are the vampire. very good work. a solid 10.

Rhymer commented on A Dark Princess's Thoughts

12-22-2009

Vampires and werewolves, and monsters oh my. Love the write, drew me in from the first line on. 10 from me.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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