A Day in the Life of a Girl

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    A Day in the Life of a Girl

    Norman Rockwell would have been out of luck at our house.
    He wouldn’t know what to do or where to begin or
    how to make us fit for a cover of the Saturday Evening Post.

    But sometimes, we came close.
    My mother always cooked Sunday meals.
    Not the kind of meals that people cook today;

    they were stick to your bones, sink-your-teeth-into meals,
    the kind that carry you through till morning.
    From the kitchen, I would hear my father turn on the radio.

    Then, it would happen.

    He would take out his records, the 78s,
    the good stuff.
    I would be lured into the next room.

    I became the sound, the beat, the bouncing melodies,
    spinning around dizzy,
    spinning into another world.

    My normally belligerent father
    would become this jovial man-
    eyes dancing along with my feet, smiling, laughing.

    Aromas filled the air along
    with melodies of happy music,
    mingling as we did,

    as a family, a family
    for one day, one afternoon
    when I finally felt truly loved.

    This must be what it’s like
    living in those pictures.
    This is what it is to be Daddy’s little girl.

    In that moment,
    we could pass for a Rockwell.
    His Sunday Evening Post.

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    redbloodink commented on A Day in the Life of a Girl

    06-17-2010

    Rockwell....... I sure thought this piece of art painted a great pic.... I could see you dancing to the old 78s....... nice job.... red

    DSLitz

    06/17/2010

    thank you so much for all your kind words, i am honored and happy you enjoyed my work so much...btw, my family always called me "Red" so when you signed it at first i thought, "how did they know to call me that?" funny, eh? :)

    redbloodink

    06/17/2010

    lol..... well you are more then welcome..... yeah I'm just simply red sometimes.......

    Vincent commented on A Day in the Life of a Girl

    11-27-2008

    Oh, by the way I gave this poem a 10.

    Vincent commented on A Day in the Life of a Girl

    11-27-2008

    This was very well done. Excellent writting. To be able to transfuse ones feelings, the mood of the moment on to a blank page is a special talent.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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