A DAY WITHOUT YOU

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A DAY WITHOUT YOU

a DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR LIFE
A DAY WITHOUT YOU MY DEAR WIFE
A DAY WITHOUT YOU MY DEAR CHILD
WILL MAKE ME GO WILD AND WILD
SO ALSO
 A DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR ORIGINAL POETRY
A DAY WITHOUT YOU THE MEMBERS OF THE
ORIGINAL POETRY
A DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR POEMS
MAKES ME GO WILD AND WILD
AND PLAY TANTRUMS LIKE MY CHILD

DAY IN AND DAY OUT
I WANT TO EAT POETRY
DRINK POETRY
SLEEP POETRY AND WALK POETRY.

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lisaner commented on A DAY WITHOUT YOU

09-23-2012

I enjoyed this poem- Makes me go wild and wild! I feel the same way. Nice job, Giri.

EyesOfRain commented on A DAY WITHOUT YOU

09-23-2012

This is very cool! I always get excited when I log in because I hope to see some new comment on my stuff :))) Nice work Giri!

giri

09/23/2012

dhanyawad eyes of rain

EyesOfRain

09/24/2012

I looked up dhanyawad, but I see there is no way to say "Your Welcome" in Hindi, so please accept it in English! Your Welcome friend!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

giri’s Poems (30)

Title Comments
Title Comments
my saute to every sister 1
A DAY WITHOUT YOU 2
cheat 2
autism a boon or bane 6
look at my body 0
nothing in our hands 1
touch my heart 3
work is worship 1
love to live and live to love. 1
god is my lord. 0
love regained. 0
marriage 1
think 0
where am i 0
surprise 0
my dear son 0
touch your heart. 1
am I old.? 0
immortal 2
life is to excel. 1
eclipse 1
fantasy 0
winner 1
am i a poet. 1
truth -wife. 0
evergreen life. 4
sexy 1
mothers love. 1
emotional 1
my friends 1