A Dozzen Roses

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

A Dozzen Roses

Back when I was a younger girl,
Always the looker
Every boys dream,
Isn't life cruel,
With the cruve balls it throws.

Funny how time passes
Passes us by so fast,
With no time to slow down
And smell the roses,
You just gotta take the blows
One by one as they come.

Two fifths later and a dozzen roses,
I lay silent forever
Never thought this would be the road
That led me home.
A broken hearted woman
Driven to fast down that
Twisty windy road,
Truned my lights out fast.

I was lookin down on myself
Lying in the road,
I heard my momma crying
Screaming oh God please dont take her,
When I was a younger girl
Always the looker
And every boys dream,
Now i'm just gone.

Two fifths later and a dozzen roses
Ends a  broken hearted womans pain,
She just could walk away,
and as she closed her eyes
Everyone heard her say these words
Two fiths later and a dozzen roses,
He walked out on me.

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ragib commented on A Dozzen Roses

12-04-2012

The essence of the poem, philosophically, got me overwhelmed with the sense of melancholy....The bite of the Time..so cruel

combatrider commented on A Dozzen Roses

11-24-2012

Never let others rule your life. What is yours cannot be taken, it has to be given and given freely and anyone that doesn't cherish you as you should doesn't deserve your gift that only you can give and no one can take.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

wiskeygirl5090’s Poems (76)

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I Am A Surviver 1
Your Growing Up 0
A Dozzen Roses 2
Fast Forword 0
Two Angels 0
The Little Things 0
Dim 4
So Lonely 1
Mothers and Fools 2
I Need Something To Believe In 2
This Hurt 1
Thinking Of You 2
A Hero's Welcome 1
Gone 0
Angels In Heaven 0
Missing You 1
Washing away my sins 1
Hold Me By The Strings 0
I Still Need To Know 2
Letting Go 6
Strong 1
Momma Your My Hero 0
Leaving Home 0
Insanity 1
Im Nothing 2
The Only Sound 1
All My Fault 1
Nobody 1
Confussed 0
No Ones Sees 4
Two Years Ago Today 2
Friends 0
Good-Bye 1
Tourcherd Soul 1
Lonely Tonight 1
Did I 3
Delusions 1
Thats All You Are 1
My Last Teardrop 3
Secerts 3
WHY 1
I'd Give My Life 1
The Little Girl 4
You Saved Me 2
Theres Only One Me 2
And I Will Try 3
Fighting threw the tears 1
To Many Times 0
Wounds 1
WHAT 1
Waiting For TheFall 1
Talk Your Shit 1
What Can I do 0
Right Where I Wanna Be 0
Don't You Dare 2
Thats Just Who We Are 0
Everything is gonna be ok 0
Angery All The Time 2
When Its Family 0
A Womans Tear 3
Puppet 3
One More Day 2
Fly Away 1
One More Tear 1
Only Love 0
Moon And Back 1
Fighting Lonely 2
Lonely 2
Forgive Me 2
Forbiden Love 0
My Demon 1
Just Who I am 1
Glistoning Eyes 1
End Of The World 3
The Game 0
Love 0