A Father's Plea

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    Written for a friend of mine. =)

    A Father's Plea

    Cease these useless struggles, she is no longer yours!
    Give her back to me, let me hold her in my arms once again.
    She's the child of my heart, I cared for her since the start.
    You can't take her away when she can barely speak!
    My once love, please give me my daughter!
    Let me hold her once again.
    I wish to be the father of the child that still lives in my heart.

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    WindsOfMemory commented on A Father's Plea

    12-16-2009

    i believe this is exactly as its titled....A FATHERS PLEA. I know firsthand how cruel a woman can be in a divorece...no offense ladies.

    kpeery09 commented on A Father's Plea

    12-16-2009

    wow loves this is good...its like I feel like its a mothers plea for her daughter that her husband like took away by force and like the mother is fighting for the daughter its like wow you know

    Ray37342 commented on A Father's Plea

    12-16-2009

    I honestly don't know what to say, other than I hope I am not ever in that position. I give it a 9

    daniel081180 commented on A Father's Plea

    12-16-2009

    i just want to say thanks it was a excellent poem and captured exactly how i feel... again thank you so much...

    redbloodink commented on A Father's Plea

    12-16-2009

    A powerful PLEA!!!!! I truley Love it..... Red

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