A Father's Voice

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I wrote this thinking of a friend of mine who's father in law just recently died monday night. From the sounds of it, His wife's family ain't to supportive and I have no clue what the relationship is or was or what might have been, but this just came to me and I wrote it. We never really know what we have until it's gone and even if we do realize what we have, thru life we have to let go at some point and know that God is in control. We don't nesceraly have to let them go, but we have to keep turning the paddle and roll wih the flow... He was loved on earth as in heaven and that's all we need to know. The love of the lost or unspoken exists forever alive or gone and that kind of love my friends is deeper then any words on paper or in a song..

A Father's Voice

A father's voice sometime's leave's you no choice,
He teaches you and trains you on what you can and can't do.
So many things you learn and srew up,
But your father is there to give and show you love.

A Father's voice is burned into your brain,
It's there when you do wrong, enuf to drive you insane.
When you do things right, A father's voice is there to shine the light.
Whether you listen or ignore, your fathers voice will never bite..

A father's voice is always filled with happiness and joy,
Sometime's you'll get mad 'cuz he says you can't go out with that boy.
But he knows how men are and that they treat women like toys,
So Please Listen to your Father's Voice, He knows what's BEST!
                  A Father's Voice is all part of the test...

Even if you don't agree or see what he see's, someday you will,
You'll thank him for keeping you headed up hill instead of down hill.
A Father I have never had; Still my heart, A Father's Voice Fills...
It's a strong bond that the Man behind the Voice is trying to Build...



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Coltsfan777 commented on A Father's Voice

03-06-2011

very good and real depiction of how a father shows his security for loved ones with his voice much like how our Father in heaven uses his voice to teach us how to live and obey His word.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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