A feather fell from heaven

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A feather fell from heaven

A feather fell from heaven
it landed in my heart,
it gave me hopes and dreams
I thought would never part.

It tickled every corner
of my souls accent,
it stroked me with wisps
of granduer I knew it was
heaven sent.

Then as the wind picked up
the feather then took flight,
and left me in a darkened place
absent from its light.

I searched my heart for traces
to see what was left behind,
that's when I found the truth
it was there the whole time.

Now I know I'm beautiful
an amazing creature of light,
tempered by my spirit
I know I'll be alright.

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dragonfly1023 commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-27-2009

this poem is beautifully phrased and I love each of those powerful couplets. looks to me like you've had a wonderful revelation :D love it!!!

randomthoughts commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-27-2009

:)................................................................................................(:

WordSlinger commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-25-2009

wow, what a beautiful poem, and very precious, this is a very image that makes me wonder where the flock of Angels can be found, :), I love your gift.

soulwriter commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-25-2009

You will be alright and that is evidenced in this beautiful soulful write from the heart. Good job and wonderful heavenly flow!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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