A Fin for One Side

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    A Fin for One Side

    And so he swam underneath a shell
    It cornered two rocks and a black tube that spiraled

    The chill under the shell thickened as he adapted, but it was his to have
    Shining away like a glass vase being doubly bagged

    There were no ultimatums; no more do or dies
    He made up for it all but often wondered why

    Days had passed, and months; you can even say years
    He'd wait all the while for hope, keeping his eyes peered

    He'd watch as the algy cleared, knowing staying there would mean trouble
    Even if there were a way out, he'd lie in an open casket holding a shovel

    Suddenly, he turned up in a place he was no stranger to
    Vague images scattered across his memory, and it was not until then he knew

    The water spread a bluish tone with a few bowfin's near
    His pupils died down like nightfall and with this freedom, nothing could interfere

    He was out in the open where the coral was easy to cut through
    Always taking credit when the credit was due

    You can't blame him for taking advantage
    But eventually time caught up with him, until there was no cure for the damage

    He still rides with the tide, and forgot himself through deceit
    The best part was that he discovered a new world where everything is make believe

    Under his shell, he remains with years of imagination that has embellished
    But to this day he lives in a tank, not as a fish, but as a relic


    Chase your mind; see where it takes you

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    Moline commented on A Fin for One Side

    09-12-2009

    I belive the symbol is called mysticism cause its meaning is so personal no one can know. did the fish hide in a bottle?

    BDIsernhagen commented on A Fin for One Side

    06-06-2009

    The Last line is very bold (pun intended!), and is the advice of a true Romantic or Trancendentalist, which I'm not sure are titles you accept, but I thought the comparison interesting. another 10 for ms.meagan, and I'll be sending your name around.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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