A Friendship Lost

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    A Friendship Lost

     From the start you hold my hand,
    dry my tears and help me stand

    Are by my side through thick and thin,
    laugh and cry when we lose or win.

    Time goes by too quickly now,
    yet we always make it some how.

    After all these years you give up,
    without thinking your words cut.

    Now our friendship is at an end,
    giving up on me is just a trend.

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    Artie commented on A Friendship Lost

    09-15-2010

    Isn't it amazing how bonds that seem so strong, can be so easily broken? It's happened to me before as well. I like how you wrote this. 10 from me
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    RPT40 commented on A Friendship Lost

    09-15-2010

    I think we all can relate to this poem. I know my past has a few of these. Nice write.
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    Charlie23 commented on A Friendship Lost

    07-25-2010

    The message in the poem is very sad, but I like your form and rhyming!
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    jamie7121f

    08/12/2010

    Thank you :)

    Qualin commented on A Friendship Lost

    07-25-2010

    IT IS A VERY SAD THING I KNOW SO WELL LOOKING FOR GREENER PASTURES WILL MOST OF THE TIME SOUR YOU HEART....GOOD WRITE....QUALIN
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    Tyme commented on A Friendship Lost

    07-21-2010

    It's sad to see such an expensive investment as your heart be let down. Hope diferred makes the heart sick.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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