A gift

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this is wrote for a dear friend of mine.

A gift

What started out as a hello
grows into something more.
A smile from across the room
turned into loving arms around my heart
A feeling , a gift
endless times of  tears, joy and happiness.
A vent to rolling on the floor with laughter.
friendship to sisterhood.
our gift till the end of time, true friendship.

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BikemanRJ commented on A gift

04-24-2010

"A smile from across the room turned into loving arms around my heart." Such a powerful statement with so few words a very heart felt line. Great poem of friendship. True friends are hard to come by these days something to be cherished. God Bless Randy

mountainlady

04/24/2010

i want to thank you. for your Comment. I wrote this poem for my best friend.

gogant commented on A gift

04-24-2010

Friendship is one wonderful gift. One's heart is an open door, and is waiting for those who want to share friendship........it can come in the blink of an eye, or years of endless truism before one realizes that it has been there all along. You give us a true gift with this one.......thank you..................................gogant

mountainlady

04/24/2010

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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