A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS

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  • Darkness To Light

    A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS

    Wriggled from slumber

    From horizon it beckons

    Piercing gloom asunder

     

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    GUSTY commented on A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS

    05-13-2010

    WELL,WELL,WELL...LET ME GUESS...IT CAN'T BE THE MOON; LET IT BE THE SUN,THEN!!! SHORT AND FULL OF WEIGHT!!!! GREAT!
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    ginga commented on A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS

    12-24-2009

    Afrique, Interesting choice of words. I like the slumber and asunder association. ginga
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    AFIRIQUE

    12/24/2009

    Thanks ginga it's literary about sunrise busting darkness. In other words, hope over hopelessness.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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