A Kiss Good-bye

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    A Kiss Good-bye

    You have damaged my heart so many times
    and have made no attempt to correct it
    now I am letting you know that our love is on the line
    cause when you had me-you refused me-abused me
    and now I'm feeling neglected

    You show no signs of sorrow
    so I doubt for us if there will be a tomorrow
    I cannot believe I have stayed this long
    you should be thankful for me
    because if it had been someone else,
    they probably would already have been gone
    but so far, as the song says, 'I'm still holding on'.

    The love we once shared was like an everlasting faucet
    we thought it would have lasted forever-
    you had it, but now you have lossed it-
    like a thief and his missing treasure-
    you will never miss your water until your well runs dry-
    I hope you thirst for my love and die-
    as the presence of my beauty leave your eyes-

    not a physical death, but more of an emotional suicide-
    I want you to miss me so much
    that you literally lose your mind-

    I want you to feel the hurt and pain-
    'walk a mile in my shoes'
    and realize that what you had was someone who was special
    who would have done anything for you

    also know that no other girl in this world
    could ever compare or even come close to our love-
    and I hate to end this relationship between you and I-
    I will cherish every moment and I wish you a good life,
    but for right now, I must leave you with a kiss good-bye

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    VaZFynest commented on A Kiss Good-bye

    01-07-2011

    deep...grittingly powerful.....i feel the angst in your words.....that was LOVE.....great read....well written..............

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on A Kiss Good-bye

    10-03-2010

    This is a powerful poem. A lot of us have loves that we love but for self-preservation have to release them. Absoluely Beautiful!

    cheronld commented on A Kiss Good-bye

    09-09-2010

    DAMN....you are an awesome writer ....this is so relatable.....I think you managed to put to words ...what we all feel in that kind of situation...another great write...Cher

    am2anangel commented on A Kiss Good-bye

    06-06-2009

    i find your poetry passionate deep and very heartfelt. I again enjoyed this one too. Wanting the person who hurt you so much to feel the pain you feel at times only feels just.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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