A Long Ending

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    When something is over, end it. Don't stick around and pretend it. Truth will never hurt as much as a lie, as the truth has a way of resurfacing everytime... ... another poem, lyric, song created.

    A Long Ending

    I remember when our fire burnt out
    When our love, it turned to ashes
    Looking back there was no doubt
    You were acting so different - You wanted out

    I was so in love with you at the time
    I couldn't see what was going on behind me
    Now I know I couldn't read the signs
    You were acting so different and I was blind

    You were saying how you loved me so
    It turned out you were only lieing
    Believing your words, I didn't know
    How you were acting so different and wanted to go

    Suddenly and out of the blue
    You grew distant and were always so angry
    I didn't know what to do
    You were acting so different but I loved you
    ...You were acting so different but I loved you...

    ~~~
    I look back at what we once were
    After all this time I still feel the hurt
    After all this time I feel the pain
    It's left me broken and I'm not the same...
    ~~~

    I think you wanted me to break us up
    You started giving me an ice cold shoulder
    But that alone, it wasn't enough
    You were acting so different and it was tough

    You'd call me over just to fight
    I'd get ambushed for no good reason
    I saw you twist from day to night
    You were acting so different and things weren't right

    Then one day I heard some truth
    You found comfort in the arms of another
    A friend's words were as good as proof
    You were acting so different, what could I do?

    You were so hateful the truth came out
    You weren't the angel of innocent perfection
    Looking back there was no doubt
    Everything was different once I found out
    ...Everything was different once I found out...

    ~~~
    I look back at what we once were
    After all this time I still feel the hurt
    After all this time I feel the pain
    It's left me broken and I'm not the same.

    After all this time I feel the pain
    It's left me broken and I'm not the same...
    You've left me broken and I'm not the same
    ~~~

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    abbythehalfie commented on A Long Ending

    04-25-2012

    Really loved and enjoyed this poem. I could feel what you were feeling, I love the picture it painted.

    Wakeitha commented on A Long Ending

    04-16-2012

    I know how you feel my friend when you love somebody and they return the love back. But remember, they don't miss the well until the well run dry. Thats whats the older people said,Smile...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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