A Look Inside....

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A Look Inside....

soo idk why

but im feeling a pure emptiness inside

like everything i once believed

was taken from me

raped, cursed and killed unmercifully!

nothings left in my torn world

and it’s all because of someone i called “my girl”!

It’s funny…

cuz everytime i open my heart

my heart cracks a little more

and will gradually fall apart

so i guess ill jus lay low

and just wish for one day that

i wont be cold

and alone….

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ShadowEyes commented on A Look Inside....

04-16-2011

This is pretty nicely written. A word of advice though: Don't use text talk when you are writing your poems, like Idk instead write it out, I don't know. Just figured I'd point that out. Otherwise, very good. Keep writing.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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demon’s Poems (25)

Title Comments
Title Comments
A Look Inside.... 1
How i feel.... 1
my world.... 1
Not a single tear.... 1
Hiding.... 1
Dream Girl.... 0
Freedom.... 0
In the fight to survive.... 0
Rambling.... 1
I can only imagine.... 0
I know i love you because.... 0
Nobody Cares.... 2
Love.... 0
Somethings Missing.... 0
Hate.... 0
Christians... 0
Does it matter.... 0
A look inside.... 0
God are you the one.... 0
Frown 0
Wicked.... 0
Friends.... 0
failure.... 0
She's Leaving... 0
Explaining myself.... 2