a lost of a family

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    the lost love ones

    a lost of a family

    I was only 18 years old when my father passed away and is was very hard and now he is in heaven looking down at me he is my angel and i have a niece that passed away at the age of 2 years old she was burn in a house fire i haved her the night before and her father took her home and the next day she passed wawy in the fire my grandfather is up in heaven too and my niece too my family is very supported too use when are family passed away but my family is in heaven looking down on use and they talk too use sometimes but gods grace i will make it through and now i can talk too god when i upset and he there to tells me that everything is going too be fine and my father now iam a adultnow and i have children of my own and i ca talk too them and let them know how i feel and they listen too me.

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    Sydney commented on a lost of a family

    06-07-2010

    this is really sad and really good. but it would be good if you could do it in verses instead of a paragraph. Sydney

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