A Love lost


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    just of the top of my head....

    A Love lost

    I can't help but to think of you
    We were just the perfect two
    While you are happy I am blue
    because I don't have you
    The thought of you with someone else
    tears me up inside
    If I ever find out I will cry
    who knows for how many nights
    my pillow will be soaked with tears
    thinking about you makes me sad
    because you 're moving on

    without me 
    I don't know how to
    deal with it
    in time I'll cope I hope

    I wish I had a magic wand
    and turn back the hands of time
    to a time when you still were mine

    I hope you will remember me
    It seams like you've forgotten
    all the times I made you laugh
    I thought we had a great thing going
    not knowing...
    you were really falling out of love with me
    My worst fear was losing you 
    now its here
    and now I wish you knew how much I miss you

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    Marsink commented on A Love lost


    Very aptly and urgently expressed from a hurting heart and mind. I'm sorry for the pain if it's from a present experience. Our god will be the healer of you spirit. thanks for sharing such a sad situation



    Thank you for your comforting words, this happened a long time ago, I still remeber what it felt like.




    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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