A Love lost

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    just of the top of my head....

    A Love lost

    I can't help but to think of you
    We were just the perfect two
    While you are happy I am blue
    because I don't have you
    The thought of you with someone else
    tears me up inside
    If I ever find out I will cry
    who knows for how many nights
    my pillow will be soaked with tears
    thinking about you makes me sad
    because you 're moving on

    without me 
    I don't know how to
    deal with it
    in time I'll cope I hope

    I wish I had a magic wand
    and turn back the hands of time
    to a time when you still were mine

    I hope you will remember me
    It seams like you've forgotten
    all the times I made you laugh
    I thought we had a great thing going
    not knowing...
    you were really falling out of love with me
    My worst fear was losing you 
    now its here
    and now I wish you knew how much I miss you

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    Marsink commented on A Love lost

    01-19-2010

    Very aptly and urgently expressed from a hurting heart and mind. I'm sorry for the pain if it's from a present experience. Our god will be the healer of you spirit. thanks for sharing such a sad situation

    jadedoll

    01/20/2010

    Thank you for your comforting words, this happened a long time ago, I still remeber what it felt like.

    Marsink

    01/20/2010

    God

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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