A Love to Be

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    This is about the pull of love on us. How much we care and how much we need to know how much we love. Hope it is enjoyed!

    A Love to Be

    Straight to your heart,
    Braving all signals,
    This contented feeling,
    Leaves a man still,
    Waiting to hear,
    Sweet charms,
    From your heart,
    All good, precious,
    Gentle person,
    Lend me to your arms,
    I will be and you will see,
    This love that only is,
    To be!

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    charlesdarling commented on A Love to Be

    11-29-2010

    Thank you all very much for the comments. It is greatly appreciated. These will keep me writing! Look for more from me.
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    walbear commented on A Love to Be

    11-16-2009

    i wish that would really happen lol.... but life is different than what we write
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    Bethane1978 commented on A Love to Be

    11-13-2009

    Oh its a beautiful peace of work. must better. great job. its a ten.
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    SuperChick76 commented on A Love to Be

    11-13-2009

    The style of your poetry is very hard to do and make it SOUND good. It's easy to write, but rarely ever sounds good. So congrats on making it sound good! That's some achievement!!!! I liked some of your phrases, classic yet not a cliché. Good job! I loved it.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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