a loved one

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    a loved one

    One year you went away what great memories are here to stay.
    I will never forget the dreadful night we would still be togather if it werent for the fight.
    We had always broken up and gotten back togather but we closed the night to last forever.
    I gave Will a flower to say we were through as I watched you walk away from me.
    I went home that nihgt knowing our love was not over the phone rang I answered "Will im sorry and I love you."
    A man begain to cry paticence grew down deep inside.
    He said"let me speak to your mother."
    Seconds later as she walked towards me with care "Tina she said Will is dead but they could not remove a flower from his hand."

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    carey commented on a loved one

    04-19-2009

    That is so sad

    caspiancri commented on a loved one

    03-22-2009

    very sad poem

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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