A Lover's Suicide

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    • Jolly
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    A Lover's Suicide
    I brought you flowers today....
    yet you didn't even acknowledge I was there
    No hug, no kiss
    no fingers running through my hair
    "These flowers are for you" I said....
    yet silence was all there was to be heard
    Was this your plan my love?
    to make me empty, to hurt?
    I cuddled up next to you...
    yet you denied my plea
    There was no touch, no smile
    you had no warmth left for me
    I poured my heart out to you...
    yet it didn't phase you a bit
    I saw no reaction, felt no response
    I guess you got sick of my shit
    I'm trying to make it up to you....
    all the sadness and the strife
    I'm the cause, yes I know
    the one that took away your life
    I brought you flowers today....
    and I left them on your grave

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    angedemon commented on A Lover's Suicide

    06-28-2009

    this poem made my day....its best from your all..i think you should give it a more cold title
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    Merrilyn commented on A Lover's Suicide

    03-21-2009

    whats done is done, the best things in life are left unsaid,everything happens for a reason alive or dead. dont dwell on your past, leave it behind. dont try to change it you'll loose your fucking mind. i wish you nothing but the best sweet heart, take time for yourself your more than worth it and not to mention, you deserve it.
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    dahlusion commented on A Lover's Suicide

    03-10-2009

    Beautiful, absolutely perfect.
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    kismet commented on A Lover's Suicide

    01-21-2009

    Terrific write.
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    Flamedancer commented on A Lover's Suicide

    01-18-2009

    I liked this poem and how the last line threw me. Thanks for sharing
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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