A MOTHER I KNEW

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    MY mom did everything for us her number one goal was to see that her children were provided for.  Although @ times we couldn't see the light at the end of the tunnel we never gave up on our mom and she never gave up on us.  Thank you mommy for always being there for us and for always seeing what we couldn't.
    We'll always miss u.



    R.I.P MOMMY

    A MOTHER I KNEW

    I knew this person who was real kind to me and just as any other she was

    struggling to be free.  She had seven children and took care of them all by

    hand.  She did it all by herself with no need for no man. 

    But if she were ever to need this man he wasn't ever there for her so he

    couldn't understand.  He left her all alone to struggle and stride, and eight years
    later this kind woman died.  I'm very upset right now and I might even studder,

    cause that kind person I knew was also my MOTHER!




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    cheronld commented on A MOTHER I KNEW

    05-26-2010

    What a beautiful tribute to your mom....really enjoyed this short poem...
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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