A MOTHER IN AWE

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    A MOTHER IN AWE

    I AM IN REAL TROUBLE TODAY FOR MY MOM IS IN DISTRESS

    SHE BROUGHT ME UP ALL HER LIFE WITH NOTHING ASKED BACK

    I AM IN TROUBLE TODAY BECAUSE I AM A MESS

    MY MOM THE SWEET FLOWER I TURND INTO A MAID

    I AM IN TROUBLE TODAY FOR I SHOWED NO CARESS

    WITHOUT APPRECIATION I STOLE HER GOODS

    WITHOUT LOVE AND RESPECT I ATE UP HER FOOD

    SHE CARRIED MY HEAD UP HIGH FIGHTING MY BATTLES

    BUT ALL I GAVE HER BACK WAS A BLOODY CATTLE

    TODAY I AM ASHAMED FOR I WAS A HYPOCRITE

    TO MY GOD, MY CHURCH, I AM OF NO PROFIT

     

    MY MOTHER, A GARDENER OF CORRECTION, THE GUIDE OF ROSES

    SHE IS THE ONE AND ONLY SANCTUARY AFTER CHRIST, MY LORD

    MY IGNORANCE AND DISOBEDIENCE, MY LAZINESS AND SELFISHNESS COMING OUT THE CLOSET

    I SAY TIME WITH HER IS NOT COOL, I AM ALWAYS BORED

    IF ONLY I KNEW HOW MUCH JOY I LOST

    ITS NOW TOO LATE I AM FIRED AS SON, I RESIGN MY POST

    TO BRING YOU HAPPINESS AS JUST A CHILD AND NOT A MAN IS NOW MY GOAL

    SORRY FOR THE PAST, MY MISTAKES I SHOULD HAVE LEARN FROM, I MADE A SCARY FOUL

    MY LIFE NOW IS TO THRIVE IN YOUR JOY

    AND STRIFE ALL NEGATIVITY FOR PEACE AND ADMIRATION

    I UNDERSTAND THAT RESPECT IS NOT A TOY

    I AM NOW IN SELF-CASTIGATION FOR A BRIGHTER DESTINATION

    SO I PLEAD MY CASE TODAY FOR A CHANCE OF CORRECTION

     

    THIS A NEW YEAR NOW AND I SMELL THE LOVE

    ITS TRUE THAT I WAS ROTTEN BEFORE BUT WITH YOUR FORGIVENESS I WILL BE MADE PURE

    SO TODAY I COME AS BEGGAR IN REQUEST FOR THIS RELATIONSHIP TO CURE

    I AM AT FAULT FOR A LOT AND MY STUPIDITY BROUGHT ME TO THE GRAVE

    IN THE TEARS OF YOUR EYES CAUSED BY MY WRONG I SEEK TO BE BRAVE

    MOTHER I LOVE YOU SO I SUPPLICATE MY POSITION AS A SON

    I CRY TO OUR GOD CHRIST JESUS FOR OUR LOVE TO BE ONE

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    GinasDiamond commented on A MOTHER IN AWE

    06-04-2010

    Very very Touching, honest, & caring to show the misstakes that a son has made towards his mother & can stand as a man & admit them. Very Well Put!!!!!

    gregster

    06/04/2010

    thanks and be cool

    mpjtforever commented on A MOTHER IN AWE

    05-26-2010

    VERY NICE WRITE. I BELEVE WE HAVE BEEN IN THE SAME TORMENTED SITUATIONS BEFORE WHEN ITCOMES TO GIVING OUR MOTHERS GRIEF. READ THE INTRODCTION TO MY BOOK JODI

    gregster

    05/27/2010

    thanks a lot.....i appreciate it

    sandyb commented on A MOTHER IN AWE

    05-18-2010

    All I can say is,"Loved It". As a Mother I know the love for a child is never lost, stolen, or gone. No matter what the wrong. I need to have my son read this. Very inspirational. Thanks for inviting me to read it.

    gregster

    05/19/2010

    i hope my step mom saw it like that.....she kicked me out for absolutely no reason stating that it well help me grow.....and now i live with a friend ,,,,i go to school and have no job......i need a job.....seriously i need work.....lol

    RareNecessity commented on A MOTHER IN AWE

    05-13-2010

    This is very beautiful. A loving tribute to the power of our Creator. Forgiveness is the divine gift and knowing who to thank for the blessing is the test from which we deliver our testimony! You penned the power of the love and forgiveness in amazingly heartfelt and inspiring way. Your witness is superb. great write! Peace and tenderness abounds! ~Angeline~

    gregster

    05/14/2010

    you are just awesome me like you now......thanks a lot

    Teardrops commented on A MOTHER IN AWE

    03-29-2010

    first i don't believe you were ever bad to your mother or your faith sometimes it seems like it but then that is what forgiveness is for great poem truly Marie

    gregster

    03/30/2010

    THANKS///..SHE FORGAVED...LOL.GOD BLESS IN JESUS CHRIST NAME

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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