A Mother's Prayer

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    A Mother's Prayer

    Father, I stand here at the edge of the world
               and call out to you softly,
               soft as the breeze on a bear cub's fur,
               hear your troubled daughter speak.
    Father, my spirit is sore,
               I have lost the sacred gift of my womb.
               My child lies cradled in the arms of eternal sleep.
               I cannot be strong, I am tired,
               and the Moon no longer smiles on me.
    Father, last night I had a dream,
               as I slept, Night crept in and stole my spirit,
               and I was left cold and empty,
               unable to feel the warmth of my blankets.
    Father, my pony ran like the wind to come here,
               but I felt no joy in his swiftness.
               My heart is as though an arrow rests in it,
               and I am unable to dislodge its painful head.
    Father, I need your strongest medicine
               to heal my wound and restore my spirit.
               As the flaming sunset fills the fading sky,
               I crave the soothing friendship of the Moon.
    Father, the echo carries my message to you,
               hear your troubled daughter speak.

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    Springsize commented on A Mother's Prayer

    03-20-2010

    I think, how can you write so beautifully, and so painfully, dualistically, and you evoke the most difficult, for a women to experience... I felt like a zombie, with a vacancy inside when I lost my babyboy. Was he too light of heart? Was I too dark, I felt heavy and wrong. It has been so many years and I hold on to my scant memories of him, am I wrong still ? I don't know if you've written your poem from experience or view, but you have really penned a beautiful work.....

    NenaT

    03/21/2010

    Springsize, you give me the highest praise and I appreciate it deeply. I am sorry for the loss of your baby. I wrote this from the view of my own mother when we lost my sister. You are not wrong to hold on to the memory of him. My mother never recovered from her loss. Till the day she died, she could not speak of her without tears in her eyes.

    gogant commented on A Mother's Prayer

    03-14-2010

    You show us here, with your words, how cold life can be at times, but we can find warmth to bring back the glow, by just asking Him to lend a hand..............A lovely piece............................gogant

    NenaT

    03/16/2010

    Thank you, gogant, I'm pleased that you like it.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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