A new day


  • Meldarth
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I was giving a subject of favorite colors; blue and purple. I'm completely done with it; but this is my work in progress.....:)

A new day

A new day,
What a saying,
How many actually follow it,

In those stormy blue eyes,
Hidden behind your smile,
Things stay unspoken,

For a new day has began,
Rising of sun,
Eyes far more crystal clear blue,

Spelling binding,
As they catch those first rays of light,
You dance joyfully,

Wearing violet dress,
Fields of lavander flow,
Gliding with the wind,

Butterflies of all colors,
Continue your dance with you,
A perfect day,

Blanket spread,
Head back,
Skyward looking,

Picnic with all that's needed,
Laughter spreads the joy,
The clouds lazily roll by,

Game of imagine,
It must be played,
Clouds; give a grand theatre

All sorts of things said,
Not just animals;
But of great battles,

Looks of pure madness,
Followed by purest of laughter,
Staring into those most enchanting sky blue eyes,

Your violet dress flowing like velvet,
As you dance again,
Music surrounds us with its magic,

Then eyes open to a buzzing sound,
New day begins,
Dawn awaits with its sweet smile,

Perfect; picnic day must await,
As life calls for your time,
Soon though,

That picnic will happen again,
Laughter through those baby blues,
Dancing in velvet dress will be such a sight to see; again.

Clinton Trapp '13

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Meldarth’s Poems (29)

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Patience and Duck Tape. 0
The Cage and Madness of Darkness 0
Darkness Rises 0
Some day 1
Fate 0
A New Day part II 0
A new day 0
Illusion of Alone 2
Echoes of Future Past 0
Wise words; or a foolish dream 4
A talk with Life 0
Dreams of Life 0
Life 1
Atlas holding my World 1
Voyage of Dreams 0
Capturing of a moment. 1
Here we go 1
Blink of Time 2
Feeling of Tears 2
The Pain of Truth 17
A Summer's Day 33
World of a 2 year old 8
Dream a little Dream 5
Light of Hope 1
Hollow Nights 2
Childhood 1
The Phoenix 1
The Night 1
Fields of Gold 1