A Note To Nancy

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Instead of sending a regular thank you note to friends, I often chose to write them a poem. Found this in an old poetry jpurnal of mine when I moved recently.

A Note To Nancy

I liked the walk down to your dock

The frilly satin dress-up frocks

The ingenious plastic outdoor biffy

How you stayed calm when the weather got "iffy"

Water bugs and rhubarb muffins

Wet beach towels and sandy swimfins

You trusted us to drive your boat

And wear the black tuxedo coat

The chit-chat mom-talk, play and laughter

Retelling tales the next day after

Thanks with great appreciaiton

Have lots of fun on your vacation!

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SavVySam commented on A Note To Nancy

01-15-2010

What a great idea! Doubles as a gift for them as well I am sure! Nicely penned!

kpeery09 commented on A Note To Nancy

12-18-2009

very nice thats very very good...I like alot of yours..I give you 10

knight4696 commented on A Note To Nancy

12-13-2009

A very cute and nicely told sentiment or Ode to Nancy! Full of appreciation and fond memories. Very nice. ... Ken

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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