A Ordinary Man

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    Be yourself, be the ordinary man.

    A Ordinary Man
    A ordinary man i am,
    Live my life with or without a plan,
    so what you can see,
    makes no difference to who i am,
    or what i ought to be,
    becuause i'm just an ordinary man.

    I am the same person,,
    i have never change,
    moving on certain things i will,
    or certain ways i arrange.
    but still, understand,
    i'm just an ordinary man.

    A regular guy i am,
    faced trials, and gone through tribulations,
    the differentiation lies within,
    our various opinions,
    with multiple occurances,
    but still what i am,
    is just an ordinary man.

    Our faces are different,
    and so is our various needs,
    this don't makes us irrelevent,
    even in the way we sow our seeds,
    so understand, the person i am;
    i am just a ordinary man.

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    chopkins123 commented on A Ordinary Man

    09-21-2010

    You captured what it is to be the common man. YOur emotions run very smoothly here and the poem has a really nice flow
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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