A PATIENT MAN IS THE VIRTUE

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  • shakeme4life
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A PATIENT MAN IS THE VIRTUE

This patient man would start with my mental house... That's how i knew he was a man not a mouse ... Slowly he adjusted my focus ,sensory , and perception... So no one else can interupt our sacred conversation...

 next was my emotional foundation ... This let me know ,my love he would never start wasting... It was my guarded heart,my deepest love he was tasting... One by one he tuned my emotions ... Checked my anger then my joy to his satisfaction... When all was said,well he headed for his next destination...

  This time he would work on my physical structure... He ever so gently held me close ... I was about to loss control,but what's worse... My eyes locked in his ,he began to teach me how to breathe... This was erotic tantric breathing... Our souls became one,this was only the beginning of the fun...

  Next he would softly massage my entire body ... All this before even thinking about entering me... Earlier he had set the stage ... In the back ,played "between the sheets" It must have been destiny for us to meet...  The smell of the musk scented candles hung in the air... At this point in my mind , i didn't have a care... Our bodies adorned cool,silk sheets... By this time he reached for my trembling feet...

  Next to come was my spiritual temple... His spirit graced mine,it was pure and simple... He leans in close to me,embracing me firmly... The pleasure of his touch had me squirming... When he whispers,my heart is for you only... You complete me ,i need you in my life... Would you honor me and become my wife...

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thecross commented on A PATIENT MAN IS THE VIRTUE

12-30-2010

Splendid tribute towards men of greatness appreciation lingers in these words that were written

shakeme4life

01/07/2011

thx the cross.....splendid.....rating of my poem ....

shakeme4life commented on A PATIENT MAN IS THE VIRTUE

09-12-2010

great men still exist

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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