A Personal Madness

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    A Personal Madness
    I love too much-I think.
    But can a person be to giving,
    too kind?
    Yes-
    Too greedy.
    Too selfish.
    Too rich.
    Too blind.
    But can a person...I mean really,
    be too kind?
    If so-well then.
    It's too hard.
    Too unfair.
    Too lonely,
    to live.

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    mbryant53 commented on A Personal Madness

    12-08-2009

    I think we do not love enough! Kindness can even melt the heart of an enemy, ever try? I have and kindness will trumph all but love. Another thoughtful write.
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    Hampton commented on A Personal Madness

    09-17-2009

    Unfortunately, a person can be all those things you highlight in your poem. However, kindness of heart is a blessing that too few possess.
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    mspoetris

    09/17/2009

    Thank you- we pay a high price-thought of as ignorant,stupid, fool

    optimistic commented on A Personal Madness

    08-01-2009

    To kind yes I like a person who is kind great write.
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    JadedJezzabel commented on A Personal Madness

    07-31-2009

    SO SIMPLE YET SO TELLING OF THE SWEET SOUL THAT LIVES INSIDE OF YOU.......I'M HUMBLED BY YOU
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    mspoetris

    08/03/2009

    Thank you for your kind comment,Jaded. You too have often humbled me with your strength and fight to be yourself.Again,thank you!

    Hanna commented on A Personal Madness

    07-07-2009

    Again true to your style - few words with powerful, impactable meaning. Kindness is never to much only if it seeks to find a kindnesss in return. Being kind without wanting a return on your investment can make life hard, lonely, and certainly unfair. BUtt it's all about KARMA to me
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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