A Place To Rest

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    • YungPoetiic
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    A Place To Rest

    God looked down on your body
    So tired from hangin on
    From a life that was overwhelming you
    He wanted back His daughter
    So He took away the air you breathee
    And gave you what was best
    A place to be at peace
    A final place to rest

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    MOMofTWINS commented on A Place To Rest

    10-02-2009

    No games, no beating around the bush, very to the point and heart felt. Im so sorry for your loss; But Id bet whom ever you lost is smiling from ear to ear about this poem. Well done.

    YungPoetiic

    10/15/2009

    thanks for the comment and I hope that she is let her soul rest in peace

    dixiemom commented on A Place To Rest

    03-24-2009

    its short but to the point and everything u needed to say was said

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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