A Play or a Show, A four letter word

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    A Play or a Show, A four letter word

     Lonely is my feeling
    Hurt is my soul
    My thoughts have submerged me in all things I know
    How do you escape the thoughts of the mind
    When the uncertainty leaves you ever blind?
    Void stares into nothing,
    feeling like the same
    I don't know how much more I can take,
    of this game
    Love is what it is
    At least that's what they say
    But it's more like some theatrical play
    Well I don't want to act anymore, the curtains must close
    There will be no more
    love hate shows!
    This is the end, I bid you adu
    Never again shall I see you
    There will be no second calls nor sequels
    Curtsy to our play
    To you have nothing more to say

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    Chaos128 commented on A Play or a Show, A four letter word

    09-14-2010

    I like the directness. there comes a time when you have to cut your losses and stop wasting unappreciated effort. you've expressed it perfectly here. Great work!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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