A Poetic Quality

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    A Poetic Quality
    I THINK BEFORE THE SPOKEN, YET I CHOOSE NOISE OVER SILENCE,

    I CHOOSE RAGE OVER ANGER, BUT ACCUSTOMED TO KNOWLEDGE BEFORE VIOLENCE.

    I CHOOSE TO PEAK THAN BE SURPRISED, AND SCARED BEFORE SAVED,

    I LIVE WITH THE GIFT OF LIFE, BUT ANTICIPATE MY DAY 'TIL GRAVE.

    I AM MIND-FILLED, HOWEVER USELESS TO MANY EFFORTS NOT YET ACHIEVED,

    I MANIFEST TOWARDS GREATNESS BUT TROUBLED BY MANY OBSTACLES YOU WOULDN'T BELIEVE.

    I'M TIRED, WORN, AND UNFUELED TO DISADVANTAGES THAT MARK SURROUNDINGS.

    HERE ARE MY QUALITIES IN PERFECTION, BUT IN YOUR EYES SO DOWNING...
    --BUT IM STILL HERE--
    ~~.....SO I LIVE ON!

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    CasimirJash commented on A Poetic Quality

    09-16-2009

    another incredible piece, in the first line I am completely opposite but I'm the same because music is my inspiration it's just I write in silence after I obtain an idea from it. Great poem, love the rhyme, I really enjoy your style.
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    DeepEclipse commented on A Poetic Quality

    03-13-2009

    Perfection. The true meaning of earning before learning. I like your style of writing.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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