A QUIET END

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A QUIET END

Our end, in this beginning,

So easily expressed

Through words softly spoken

A caress devoid of touch

Marking a trail along my breast

Then there was nothing

For I had ceased to feel

And laughed in madness

For something that I think is real

A searing pain burns deep

Withing my crumbling mind

Till there is nothing,

My sorrow crying tears

I cannot shed

Spining into the void

A place where everything

Which is not is,

Where man meets God

And life is blurred

Here, we leave

To spend eternity apart,

Wandering a world

Bereft of colour,

Shaking trees a small

Part of history

Just to see leaves fall

And life begin anew

In a tiny accorns heart

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atrophy42 commented on A QUIET END

06-02-2009

This poem painted such a deep picture for me. Beautifully written. Sank into my heart I will read more of these.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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